On Tue, 10 Jun 1997 14:18:41 +0200 Monika Wunderer wrote:
>what do you think?
>
>to long? not strict and understandable?
Well, I thought I would throw in my two schillings.
Everyone's ideas (and pretty much words) are obviously included. I
basically tightened it up, removed some redundancy, and placed Santiago's
suggestion at the beginning instead of the end where I think it works
better.
Here it is. Hope it helps.
Oudeis - a world-wide odyssey through space and time that explores the
frontiers of new technologies by the use of the internet as both a tool for
collaborative development and as a performance space. Using real actors in
simultaneous interaction with virtual actors, this global theater
production will follow the journey of Odysseus across seven international
stages and will utilize the Web as the eighth stage to link actors and
audiences alike in this work-in-progress.
Scheduled date of performance is 1998