read the text. i enjoyed it.
i think you could use the repetition of parts a bit more (as in the first
episode).
and i have my doubts wether the fifth episode (the one with Zeus typing a
lot) will be as good in the play as it is to read. i think maybe the
audience will get tired of reading the computer screen. nevertheless, it
gives the play a space to breathe which is good, and since no sound will be
produced besides the cyberchor, the audience will notice silence, and rest.
have a good year,
santiago
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